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Email Exchange: Lonnie Martin's Explanation of 'The Last of the Manson Girls' Film Adaptation (File 025329)
Email from filmmaker Lonnie Martin to Paul Krassner explaining creative liberties taken in adapting Krassner's essay about Charles Manson and his followers into a feature film, addressing concerns about historical accuracy versus dramatic storytelling.
Summary
Lonnie Martin responds to Paul Krassner regarding the film adaptation of Krassner's Manson essay, 'The Last of the Manson Girls.' Martin explains how he transformed Krassner's essay into a screenplay by using broad strokes as narrative beats while adding fictional elements, character development, and personal experiences to create dramatic tension. The filmmaker justifies creative decisions such as modifying dialogue, adding scenes with Mae Brussel, changing who initiated the LSD involvement, and incorporating personal anecdotes about panic attacks and difficult friendships. Martin emphasizes that the film explores themes of aging, social irrelevance, resistance fatigue, and acceptance, and expresses concern about protecting Krassner's legacy while explaining the difference between documentary truth and cinematic fiction.
From: paul krassner [paulkrassner@roadrunner.com]Sent: 1/16/2019 7:50:41 PMTo: Nancy Cain [ ]; Tom [Steven Gaydos [IM=1]; George Krassner []; Holly Krassner Dawson [1Marie Moneysmith []; Linda W. Grossman]; Daniel Dawson]; Danny Goldberg Caryl Ratner [11111n]; KevinBright I ; Michael Simmons [rIIIMM.M111]; Samuel Leff[Ii]; Bob Fass [1]; Lynnie Tofte Fass I; LeeQuarnstrom]; Barb CowlesSubject: Fwd: Manson Girls / Acid Trip AgreementImportance: HighFrom: Lonnie Martin <Subject: Re: Manson Girls / Acid Trip AgreementDate: January 16, 2019 at 6:50:44 AM PSTTo: paul krassner < >Hi Paul.11Thanks so much for sharing both your note to Steven and your latest Manson essay with me. It'salways wild to read that piece. I have parts of it memorized at this point.After reading your comment about vibes from the movie, I feel like I have some explaining to do.This is all stream of consciousness writing so take it on merit, I guess. No harm is meant.As 'The Last of the Manson Girls' got closer to completion, I was insanely nervous about showing itto you. I knew it there was very little in it that was "Truth" in terms of minute details. What I didwas take the broad strokes of your essay and make it into the "beats" of my story.For example, Sandy's invitation to take a bath formed the spine of the "mermaid" scene.Squeaky's line, "Manson never took anybody who wasn't already discarded by the society"formed the spin of the animated fever dream where she talks about her father. The visit toMerrick was a good place to get into some of my views about conspiracy and the human mind'sability to latch on to anything to avoid unpleasant facts. Squeaky's line "Well what do you expectfrom me. I'm crazy" was obviously later then this meeting, but it was just too good a line to let go.I didn't use elements of your essay that made actual filming and production tougher. For example,the interlude in your essay where you went to a home of friend of the family and smoked weedfor example became "you" smoking weed at their pad.I added in beats, character traits and dialgoue that helped form that "dramatic arc" that works inmovies so well. You and the Manson Women must have talked about far more than youmentioned in your essay, but I took liberties with what was said and how it was presented. MaybeI should have reached out to you about these conversations. I guess I was afraid of the Truthgetting in the way of a good story.HOUSE OVERSIGHT 025329All the Mae Brussel stuff is there because its seemed a simple (Ha!) way to explain to the audience"Why is Paul going there?" Squeaky asking for the LSD rather than you bringing it was, again, aneasy and short way to explain to the audience why LSD was involved.There's a lot of my personal experience in the film. I *did* have a panic attack while on LSD andpassed out hugging a toilet. (I didn't however go to a desert/beach and talk to futuristic SqueakyFromme, though I was in the desert when it happened.) I once had a very contentious creativefriendship with one of my best friends who is a friend no longer. That seemed to mirror some ofyour relationship with Lenny Bruce. I also felt like your relationship with Lenny had so much to dowith your evolution as a writer, satirist, and comedian that it seemed proper to put that in there. Iwrestled a *long* time over even mentioning your daughter because it seemed more of apersonal invasion than you had bargained for. However, based on your memoir, it was obvioushow important that relationship and aspect of your life was to you.The smooching with Squeaky isn't meant to be any kind of bawdy Enquirer scandal. It's tied to theidea that by the end of the movie this "Paul" isn't scared of her. The kiss is mentioned as beingsymbolic of acceptance and despite all their philosophical differences, "Paul" and Squeaky in thefilm find a way to "accept" each other. "We've got a find a way to love the people we hate."is the statement I always say at talkbacks when people ask me what the ending of the moviemeans.The movie was conceived and made as a response to my own feelings of doubt about myself, andmy growing social irrevelavance as I age. (I turned 40 while making it.) It's about coming to termswith the mistakes I've made and the hubris that caused them.It's also about resistance fatigue. It asks (in a roundabout way), "What happens if the good guys*do* lose the war?" I saw similarities between how the protest wing of the counterculture mayhave felt in the wake of RFK, the Weathermen and the SLA, and having the whole movement forsomething bigger start to go sour as it mainstreamed. The similarities between Nixon and Trumpare so obvious, I feel like I don't even need to mention them. I saw similarities in your spiritualjourney to mine. "Paul Krassner" in my script was in some ways a vessel to project all my ownhang-ups onto. I suppose that's an unfair burden to put on you.I don't know if this all sounds like excuse-making, but it's my way of saying that I certainly don'twant to "break a legacy." I think the work you did with "The Realist" is important and paved theway for the Onion, The Daily Show, and society's general acceptance of raw, cutting satire in theworld of politics and journalism. The last thing I would ever want to do is have that be tainted.Film has that power of course. The medium by it's nature hypnotizes, and has a funny way ofclouding up the truth. Fiction becomes history and vice versa.More than anything, I don't want you to feel taken advantage of or disrespected.HOUSE OVERSIGHT 025330I probably should have explained this to you earlier. I probably shouldhave called and had a conversation with you about it, and I'm happy tostill do that.Thank you again or allowing me to tell this story, even through my owndistorted lens.All the best,LonnieHOUSE OVERSIGHT 025331